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Maria sared down at her in shock.

Wow, this was pretty original actually and I really liked it! It kind of reminded me of the Hungry Caterpillar, which is one of those books that you never forget, ...

Maria bidn't say anything she wasn't ready fr=or a bad memory..

"Wuzup?"she said lightly as she walked past. She decided this wasn't the tie for action...

*ha now we both at least have one thing in common.*

*actually some people same to never be on here when Im on so..ya.*

"Cha!" Grace said breaking into there conversation will she her self awoke. "Oh....um...sorry?"she asked as she plushed a deep red. She had just had a night mare.

I love the first one, how the eyes sre the way they are...but the other two are blury... keep up te good work! -em

Sorry I can't read it I get lost and then I doze away from this.If you enter twice that is the only way to space the paraghraphs right...

I just read it last week when I was sick and I thought it was pritty good. *sorry it's so short...*

"Um...ya." she answered lightly as she shruged sbout the fact he dismissed a lot of things.... *Im at home so heres the pic...*

I agree with mark^ -em

Hello!*calls to far away person* >.< hi -em

Ok this is a post your needing to critques or your wanting a good story offer. Ether say what's a good story and post a link or post a link ...

I myself am adicted too.... pardon me if you find many arors in this or any of the storys and such by me. And id love for you to check ...