mycocosm

Thanks a lot for correcting it all! I can't believe I made all those mistakes, now I'll be more careful next time. And thanks for the recommendation of the book, ...

"Once upon a time, in a very faraway land, there lived three little pigs..." Michael stopped. His friend Adrian was staring at him so still and so serious that he ...

Great... The story really catched me, I think it was wonderful. Although I agree that you should make more paragraphs, just for a place to rest the eye. The one ...

It is awesome. I liked the first paragraph, then it didn't really catch me the next few paragraphs, and then it hooked me again. Although I think you made a ...