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Great story! It was packed with action, and although I cannot relate the characters, I really liked it! I did feel a bit out of place when you talk about ...

Nice story! I found it really interesting, and I think you had a very good first sentence. Although, I found some mistakes that I would like to point out: She ...

I like the story, although I find it really deep and even a little depressing. But I like how you explained rain, and thought about rainbows. Although I found a ...

Hell's Forest had nothing to do with Hell. It wasn't even in Hell. It wasn't even a forest. It had once been, until the fire of 2009. Now, it was ...

That was very good, I think you will get a good note in mythology class (I never knew there were mythology classes, but cool!) There are just a few mistakes ...

Nice story! That would be a harsh dream to have! I really liked it and I think it was very good, although I would like to point out a few ...

That was great! I think this one was better than last chapter, even though there isn't a lot of action like the prologue. I still don't understand how it is ...

I liked this chapter, but I think that it was a bit too slow after reading the prologue. The prologue is full of action and this is something completely different. ...

Awesome! I'm really looking forward to reading the first chapter, although I did find it a bit confusing as I read it. I think you should tell us how had ...

Well, I just want to say that it was interesting, but I don't think you really needed to explain all the creatures or things that will appear in the story. ...

Wow! That was a really good story! It caught me when I started reading it just until the end. There is just a mistake I'd like to point out: He ...

Good job! I think it was an amazing story, although there are some mistakes that I would like to point out: Trees flew by you, You began the story in ...

Thanks a lot Kasim. I get your points, but about the smell of the dead person, I didn't mean that Vladimir is the dead person, like a zombie. He smells ...

It was the darkest day of autumn. The wind was cold, several degrees below zero, frost covering Hell’s floor. The trees hovered over me, throwing their shadows at me, silent ...

I think it was a good story. Although I think that you made the story a bit too fast. You should also have explained and described more of the wars ...