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Unfortunately, the nuke is deactivated and does not explode, instead hitting a singing tree on the head and making it furious.

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Hello Angelreader, could you review my story? It's fantasy and it's called Achilles . Thank you!

You picked up one of creativityrules' bones and threw it away, accidentally poking Death in the eye. Enraged, he took you to Hell, where he threw you into a flaming, ...

Hello, I have a fantasy story that I would love to have reviewed as critically as possible. It's called Achilles . Thank you! :D

Hello Lili, I liked your story, but I agree that it goes a little too fast. I think you should either make the chapter longer, make two parts of the ...

Hello Lili, I liked your story, but I agree that it goes a little too fast. I think you should either make the chapter longer, make two parts of the ...

Que buen poema! La verdad, yo ni leo ni escribo poesía, pero esto me encanto! Me gusta mucho como vas contra la corriente, eso es ser original. También me gusto ...

I don't know whether I will continue this story or not, so I put it in "short stories". Like and comment please! It is true that your life flashes by ...

Could you review what I have done so far of my novel? It's fantasy, just for you to know. Chapter one is found here . Chapter two is here . ...

Wow! That made me feel so good at home, and I can't wait for Christmas. The last part though, that was harsh. It would be really sad burning down a ...

You're welcome!

That was a good poem! I think that you always have to start with a capital letter when you write a new line (although I'm not sure, I don't write ...

Thanks!

Nice story! I liked it although I think it went very fast! You probably should have done it a bit longer. Then there are just a few mistakes that I ...