mybrokenreality

I stare out my window, My single, broken window. Around me people stand, Talking, smiling, laughing. They stand on the other side of their windows, Their clear, perfect windows. Not ...

I really liked this! The way it deeply went into what determination is, and what it does really made the poem great. Everything flowed amazingly and it was just great ...

This was really awesome! I absolutely loved how you showed children as they really are, with every ounce of true innocence they have. It was truly great. It brought back ...

Yeah, after about an hour of utter frustration I gave up trying. Ha, I'm actually writing in my journal now. =)

Hmmm...I really liked it! It was interesting to read, the way it told a story. :D

Really? Thanks! :D

Thanks!^^ I actually just wrote one of my best pieces yesterday and its being featured! Haha, its called I'm Trying. You can check it out if you'd like to. =)

Haha, I know what you mean. I sat there writing this and thinking 'This really STINKS.' It didn't have too much to it that I liked myself but I figured, ...

Now...I actually had writers block when I wrote this so I'm not really sure that it's any good but I figured, since I wrote it, I might as well post ...

Well, like Flower above mentioned love poems are very common. To make one stand out you really need to work at it so when your audience reads it, it'll pluck ...

That was so awesome! :smt003 I loved every second of it. It flowed pretty nicely and made you think a bit. This was my favorite part: We are the hunter ...

Wow...I logged on and saw all these great reviews. It made me smile! :D I'm really glad so many people liked it, considering it was one of those, spur of ...

You look at me as though I'm a child. I'm not that five year old daughter anymore. I've grown; matured. But you can't see that, can you? You say you ...

Hmmm...this was...interesting. It kind of goes hand in hand with the saying 'Less is more.' Lines may have been short but they delivered what you wanted to say. Although, maybe ...

Loved it! =) Can't wait for the next chapter!