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i must say that this is a lovely poem, simple and short, but this line That saying that so loud leaves one a target. i find is to long and ...

i really like this peom, it has good meaning, and good questions, that i do think that everyone, somewhere in there hearts want to know the answers too, even though ...

i find this poem interesting, no in a bad way though.. it's nice to read a poem about something other then love or death or abuse.. most poems i read ...

Life does go on, as we knew it would. All the pain we took, for the greater good. I think that this opening line was really powerful, it was simple, ...

A.L.I.Y.A. THIS IS SO FREAKING INCREDIBLE!!!!!!! I CAN'T EVEN TELL YOU hoW AMAZING!!!! i mean i knew you could write, but damn girl this is da BOMB!!!! you are a ...

this is a really beautiful poem!!!!!! i love it cuz i can totally empathize with the charecter! how were you inspired to write this?? i like how you used so ...

this is really lovely and touching.. it seems like you picked out the words carefully(even if you didn't) but i think you should try to come up with a stronger ...

owen i love this i honestly do i didn't think you could write like that... that's what i'd call talent... and sorry but it is really cute!

how do you measure love? maybe with how much love you feel or maybe how many times you realize it is real... do you measure it in inches? can you ...

leela i loves it its so creepy and wasome it's like one of your scary stories.. wich you should, by the way, post on here cuz they're so creapy... honestly ...

i really like how this poem ends, but its a little confusing cuz some lines rhymed with eachother and then they wouldn't, so i would check that... but i love ...

This is a really awesome story i wanna read more you should keep writingit's such beautiful writing too. I'm jelouse! What inspired you to write this? it's really sad but ...

This is a really awesome story i wanna read more you should keep writingit's such beautiful writing too. I'm jelouse!