mungerverna

Yet another thing I missed during editing... thanks for catching that! And thanks so much for the kind words and critique.

Thanks for the critique, as well as for the grammatical mistake that I missed during editing (:

Thanks for the kind words! And thank you for the tense correction, I must have missed that during the editing process.

First off, thanks for the review. To address the points you've made, there are strong allusions to the fact that it is the narrator's grandfather who is being laid to ...