mtempleton

Hmmm, thought provoking, well reasoned argument you have here. When it comes to LOTR there is no such thing as over thinking. It's true to say that Sauron is a ...

Yep Twilight definately has its issues. I was swept along at the start, and I still hold it as a guilty pleasure. But after reading all four books in the ...

Hmmm. Isn't the plot of the story basically about the character's issues? Perfect characters are boring unless there to make a point about how terrible the other characters are OR ...

I sing in a band, and having practiced in a small room with a phenomenally excitable and passionate drummer, I can say that there isn't really an onomatopoeia (can't spell) ...

I'm not so hot with the mythical creatures. Used to watch Hercules a lot, but other than that... What about a villain who was purely human, without magical powers or ...

I can see myself writing for a living, but only if I marry someone rich. Otherwise I'd have to get a job to earn money and then write all night, ...

Hi everyone! I posted this a couple of moonths ago with plans to turn it into an actual short story rather than some random metaphor thing. That didn't happen. I ...

Hi there! This works really well. Although I was drawn in by the bi-line. Serious lack of onion rings in this piece. I digress. I think we've all been in ...

He he. One rhythm error, I think. Stanza 3 "comcast just can't compete" cut "just." Othere than that, for fun, it was brilliant. I don't want to criticise. Ah google. ...

A review for you. My comments are bracketted. Feel free to dismiss them if you wish! Hope it's clear enough. Heaven on Earth I wonder sometimes what life would be ...

Fire is right. You captured the characters really well. Especially Tifa, I think. I always feel sorry for Tifa. There's a serious lack of Final Fantasy fanfiction. Please write some ...

Hi guys. Thanks for these comments - exceptionally helpful. Bravo! Most of the things you found are either typos (how is that possible when I edited this down from being ...

Hello! Would you believe that I actually have conversations like this with my characters? it's worst when I have to kill them... I can't really find a way to critique ...

Part of the brief for this piece was that I had to keep the words below 300. It's called microfiction, apparently. Anyway, I'm still not sure - for obvious reasons ...

ok I'm studying english and reading James Joyce's "The Dead." this is really not the same thing. I'm almost shocked by this. Firstly, as you've been told, you have to ...