mtempleton

Hey there. You’re getting good answers so far. Would it confuse you if I tried to write a little about the Scottish system. Its different again. 1. What are the ...

Hey there. This was good. Not that much to review. I thought that the last couple of lines of dialogue was a little forced, but then, I guess that it ...

Hello again! I read. I laughed. I still love how you're presenting good old benvolio. Shock, though, at your cutting all those oxymorons. "Here's much to do with hate, but ...

Pure genius! Seriously. Much funnier than the twilight spoofs still clogging up fanfic and scripts. Kudos. I think my favourite is the way you drew Tybalt. Please continue with this ...

Hey there! Shall we review? Firslty, I have to agree with outofthebox. Your story wasn't that confusing but I don't know how much I could really relate your extended metaphor ...

Yay I’m the first to review. I’m a faithful fan, I’ve decided. Anyhoo, usual rules: After I got home I rode the elevator up to my room which was on ...

The first story I've written on my new shiny laptop. Please review, it's only little. Sorry in advance that it's typical of my writing, in that I seem to repel ...

Hello again! I found chapter two. yay! I have every faith its going to be as good as chapter one. shall we see? I thought I felt my heart skip ...

Hey there Rosalie! Welcome to YWS. Firstly, we have a couple of rules here: 1. The 2:1 ratio. If you have a piec of writing to post, please freview two ...

Fire, After And in the very ending of your world, forests will be flame. Mountains will blind in the heat of centuries. Oceans will chaos with the blood of the ...

Hi, I found you! Am I too late to review? We seem to have been especially thorough with you. This is a good thing. Firstly, I loved this. I’ve had ...

Hi everyone. even a novel of 80,000 words must begin somewhere, right? Let me know what you think, especially if you want to read on. m ******** Cara Hart had ...

Hi there. you've had soem thorough crits already so I'm not going to go all the way through. my pointers would be on making sure that the intro. doesn't drag. ...

Hello! *waves overenthusiastically" Welcome to YWS. Can't wait to see your stories. PM me if you want a thorough crit. I'm also in the middle of writing a book. Why ...

I knew french... a year ago. I like to pretend I know Japanese. I can say "hi there," and "shut up," in Korean. I attempted to learn Spanish, and failed. ...