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Nice. Before I move onto a review of the actual piece, a congratulations is in order. Hooray! You've stopped using so many unnecessary words ;) I really enjoyed reading this ...

Aww. Please, thank me profusely :) See, it wasn't so bad was it? So I'm having a little trouble categorizing this piece. You know, reading the first chapter, I never ...

I honestly have no idea what you just said, but it sounds cool :) Did you make the whole thing from scratch on paint or something like it? Too bad ...

Oh no! He spelled her name out in flowers? Nobody deserves that kind of torture :( The plot thickens... I should have expected it, but the twist in this chapter ...

Hi, I've entered the same contest, different theme. So I know, 150 words... It ain't easy :P What I like to do is make sure I have much more "powerful" ...

Finally, I can take the time to review this piece. It feels familiar but at the same time I haven't read anything like it. I found it interesting, and although ...

Reading this piece again, I can't help but think that I did interpret this story very cynically at first. I imagined the speaker as a wealthy representation of bureaucracy who ...

Flash fiction is deceiving. 250 words become thousands as you read them over and over again trying to figure out what they mean. My interpretation of this piece: Colors I ...

I had to go find my bounded book of Edgar Allen Poe's works after reading this short. I nodded read it again as soon as you allude to the Red ...

Well, I don't want to give everything away, and I did write this piece as completely open to interpretation, but if you want to see where I was coming from ...

It smiles, teeth glistening with the taste of my humanity. I inhale, nothing. Turning, it leaves me for dead. Less than human, I crawl against a shattered path. Trees wilt ...

Oh my goodness you have no idea how many times I've written this same poem, story in my head and on the margins of my "outlines." I think this transcription ...

Oh Bridget, what do you get yourself into? My guess is that she wakes up in a jail cell in this town of only 866 people. As always your chapters ...

Ah, into the woods she goes. Finally. Hopefully this time, she can stay away for more than two seconds :P Another fast-paced chapter and the action keeps coming, but I ...

I liked this piece a lot. It made me go and seek out the Manic Street Preachers for myself and I must say, thank you for that :) The story ...