moosiegirl

out of the darkness and inot the light, we search for a chance to get into the fight. Out of the starkness of love gone awry We mumble and stumble, ...

i started at age three and i read see spot run(i think that's the typical learning book >_

Nothing new, nothing to hide pain. The dreary rain just pounding. Can't you see the difference between us. This could never work. This is to be the end- Of us. ...

this story is ok but i think more descriptions and similies and metaphors and personification oh dear im babbling but u get the point ;)

long ago.... like since yms started? idk well maybe they'll have mushrooms, or squash toed frogs next or moosiegirls.... mutters inconcievably

this was good but there are alot of grammer mistakes also there are alot of plot difficulites and the story is in second person and that just makes my head ...

This would be a pretty good piece. You just need to get more descriptive words and get rid of all the grammer mistakes and voila! You suddenly have the next ...

what are those things....

What is the scientific name for a microscope?

this poem really fits my expressions right now... i think you did a fab job and well i can't really think of something to critisize.... i'll get back 2 u ...

I think your poem was pretty good in terms of content but the subject material maybe more appropriate in Lyric Poetry or some place like that, but that's just my ...

first of all plz get some punctuation it would make it so much easier to read. I agree with Ginger that you overdid it a little bit in some parts. ...

Really realized what we are doing to this planet. So I wrote this. Not much but yeah. I hate life I hate life It’s not real. It is a waste ...

I guess for most ppl they would like the song but I'm in a really good mood and I don't feel like reading this stuff so maybe that's why. Your ...

CHORUS Hello Kitty Steamboat Hey, who's in charge here? Hello Kitty Steamboat De nada, De nada. Hello Kitty Steamboat What else can I say? Hello Kitty Steamboat De nada, De ...