moosiegirl

Hey darchoco, I liked your chorus the part about being stuck in his eyes do you mean like being pulled towards him? anyways the rest was pretty good. Your friend ...

We were just about to last forever. Nothing would have stopped me, From breaking this apart again... If I wanted, I could have had it again. But you had to ...

We were in it too fast. Our brakes started skidding, I'm holding onto you. Your face won't stop spinning. We were out of power, Out of mind, and desire. Floating ...

i dont exactly agree with niteowl but i think that your song is pretty well done. If you add a little more that it seem a little more clear Go ...

I think it was very well writen. Is Jonathon a doctor? I was a little confused about that but otherwise i think your story was pretty well writen.

I agree with BFG but your ending stood out extremly well. Nice job! Your words were cleaverly chosen. It seems like a lot of people can relate to your song.

Whenever I'm on his bed, With your old black hat hanging on my head... I see you with Angie every day. I want to mend my heart, make it go ...

I'm not the kind of girl, Who wears pink and plaid lined classics. I'm a smother red or cherry, Covered by a bomber's jacket. Im not a that teacher's pet. ...

Nothing fits in my mind, forever more. I say nothing will keep my boat afloat. Because the shadow you keep has blocked out the sun. And the dust that you ...

People who want to be friends should: Tell them when something looks bad on someone tell them if their jokes arn't funny stop being a bossy idiot stop trying to ...

Mr. Finch would always drive that yellow car down to the drugstore on Monday mornings. Joey and me would sit on top of his fence and wave to him every ...

this was brilliant i liked the twist at the end : )

What's Nanowritemo or whatever u call it?

that was amazing

I was born in a clearing near a lake my earliest memories are but little of that time or maybe it's that i don't want to remember I still remember ...