moonlight123

Suicide due to depression is not OK, because they still have a healthy body that is working properly! They can get help and be better someday. Depression is curable.

As the others said, you did an excelent job with turning the nursery rhymes from something sweet into something dark. I liked the way the first part was mature in ...

I couldn't believe what I had just agreed to! The words had just tumbled out of my mouth and now I was going to go on a hunt for platinum ...

I really liked it! You captured the pain, the suffering. At first it seemed to be another poem about awful things in life and such, the ending caught me off ...

Wow. That's all I had to say when I was done with this. It's just so, so heartfelt and real. It really lets the reader feel the emotions. I can't ...

I know it was a bit cliched, I know it was a bit short, but I really don't care because I loved your poem! It was simple and said it ...

The first thing that Bree noticed when she opened her mother's and grandfather's door to their quarters was the silence, the stillness. It seemed to suffocate her. She stood in ...

I thought it was great. I said before that I liked this, but you should've kept this as the prologue!!! it flowed better. Anyway it was less boring than the ...

hey Selene, It started off well but then went downhill (It sounded a lot like my writing actually) it began to get very boring by the end of it as ...

I thought that it was brillant! It was so true to life! (and I do the exact same thing with the words tumbling out when I write...) :D Everyone else ...

~This is my second poem and I really don't know how good it is... especially the last stanza. Read it with a rhythm to it, it works better~ I don’t ...

I would just like to make one point, back in the eighties it was during the last days of the cold war between USA and Russia, we needed those defense ...

I love the way your poem definetly has rythum to it, (something that is close to impossible for me to accomplish) and the beginning of it was awesome: Your mother, ...

Ronald Reagan was by far one of the best presidents of the 20th century. He had gas down to 85cents, the economy was booming, and there were tax cuts galore! ...

In my opinion, I don't think that there should be any death sentencing. It is truly taking away another's life, no matter how evil or how terrible the crime. Another ...