moonlight123

I really liked this. The flow was flawless, each word was perfectly chosen. (I can never manage to incorporate any of these features into my own poetry.) All I can ...

I just wanted to say thanks! Your critique was VERY helpful! :D

Angry faces glare up at me as I walk my final few steps I tell myself that it will only take a few minutes Knees weak, I feel the need ...

Wonderful, absolutely wonderful! Your poem was filled with emotion and just the right amount of description. This is my favorite stanza, the picture comes so easily into my mind... After ...

Hey! This was pretty good. The flow was wonderful, the best I've seen in awhile. Flow is very important, making reading your poem effortless. I have to say that your ...

Great poem. Your style sorta reminds me of my own so I was intrigued from the first line. It had a pretty good rhythm to it and most of the ...

Awww, this is so sweet. i love the way you describe everything so perfectly... just like true love is. Your ending is great, perfect. I can so connect with how ...

~I wrote this for school about my father, i hope you enjoy!~ It was a dark, frigid, windy night outside as I carried the terrible smelling bag of garbage out ...

I thought that this was really sweet! Great job on the flow of the words and such... (I always have so much trouble with that). As everyone else said, you ...

I liked it! Wonderful job! As the others said, you did a great job of the feeling of addiction. Wherever it is, I interfere. You hear my siren song calling: ...

This was pretty good, but I think you could've added more to it. Why were you lost in the beginning? Did something happen to you? What made the light come? ...

Enjoy, I'm not much of a photographer, but I love these pictures from when I went to upstate NY, USA for the summer... [/img] An old cattle grazing field [img] ...

This is an interesting poem, it was different. I like the way you started it, with the water hitting your back. The way you sort of narrated your thought process ...

Great poem! Wonderful symbolism! I love the points that you make...I often find myself having many of the same thoughts. You've ended it perfectly. This was masterfully written...gold star!

~To Haruno Sakuro Yes, you're right, I'm sorry I made that mistake, that's what I meant to say...