monolith

well, what you're stating is nothing but a fallacy. Your lack of ability or information to prove a point doesn't describe the ability or information available to refute a point.

want to write something awfully depressive, dark and full of dementia? then listen to Veil, a burzum-esque one man suicidal black metal band. best song "suicide winds"

don't ya think?

reminds me of a bella tarr film. probably satantango. sounds great, although places without gobernment have... survived. i think that's what happened to belgium right?

not sure i could write about that. BUT IM SURE I COULD PLAY SOME JAZZ and then say it was about that... although it's a good idea

-rains- And all the world, was stoped As flying leaves, by rakes where toped And such a flash, lit up the sky And no one dared to wonder why Fire ...

good work, it is, in essence, what i feel that free verse should be, the fluidity of speech, made a poem. the only issues are ofcourse the grammatical faults, and ...

the ghost, the flesh, the pillor -what is this?- asked the dark figure, trapped among the endless white. -this are... my hands...- he looked down, -so... this is... me...- he ...

it is good indeed, as said before, gramar and spelling could be checked, but besides that, great job. i liked it because it is fluent and show's the true nature ...

good poem, in my opinion it reflects the nature of two things, maybe a dramatic relationship between them. it sounds as if the speaker and his "sister" where two parts ...

It's a good poem, really awsome and deep that expressed the beauty of a normal chat, a tought caught by a net inside the mid and turned into a poem ...

umm hi, well, could i ask you to review this? thnx ^^

the poem itself is ok, it's always valid to leave options open like the "to fend them off" line, this enables the reader to relate to the poem on an ...

your imagery is simply beautyfull, i can perfectly relate to the character who needs to go somwhere green, somewhere better. it is really a good poem, it flows and acts ...

-Left out no shelter- Left out no shelter Dried out, no more tears to cry A new grave is dug I drop crimson tears For all the loathing and pain, ...