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Re: See life is beautiful?
This was a really nice poem. I really liked how in the beginning, it focused on pleasant things. And they weren't just pleasant things in general, but little specifics. Maybe ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Disasterpiece
I gotta say, this is really impressive! I love how you took something so common, something so often taken for granted or ignored, and you gave it relatable life. I ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: Breaking Me
I've gotta say, I genuinely enjoyed reading this! Maybe it was because I have a poem fairly similar to this, at least in subject matter. But it was fantastic. I ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Intentions
Hi!! First off, let me just say: THIS. IS. BEAUTIFUL. Seriously, it touched me so deeply. (And might I just add that I appreciated the length this time!!) I completely ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Fragility
I really really like your poetry!!! And trust me, that's saying something, because more often than not, I have the HARDEST time reading poetry. I hate to be nit-picky, honestly, ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Clumsy
Ahhhh this is so cute!! I really liked it, especially because of how true it is. My only suggestion /would/ be to lengthen it a bit. I'm sure you could ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: A Siren's Ballpoint
I know you said this was old stuff, and that you write so much better now. But WOW! I honestly cannot even begin to express how impressed I am with ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Holy Rolling (12)
I've already told you this in person, but I just wanted to reiterate the fact that I love it so very much. I think I'm automatically drawn to anything... haunting. ...
Apr 19, 2011
