mminc13

To WritingSpitfire, Thanks so much for reading the chapter! As for the confusion on the Cursed oNes part, here's what I'm going to add to Chapter 1: "And everyone knew ...

that was awwwwwwwwwwwwesome! Sorry, so sorry I can't write more. I don't have much time. But that's amazing poetry you've got there! I can tell you're a poet :smt002

CHAPTER THREE OUTCAST 10:45 IN THE MORNING. DAY 45, YEAR OF THE SINGING DOGS. YEAR 750 Jennifer was different now. No, not just different – not even completely different. She ...

Hi Nikkilow! mminc13 thinks that Gifted, so far, is very good. So far, it's pretty good. Very well paced, very realisted, and there are only a few problems, as far ...

CHAPTER TWO WELCOME TO XETOK, JENNIFER 6:45 IN THE MORNING “What is this?” Jennifer asked, rubbing her eyes. “What’s happened to me?” Except, she couldn’t. It was impossible. All she ...

Note: I was going to put chapter 2 here, but i put it somewhere else. sorry for the inconvenience.

Thank you everyone that helped me with this!!!! My thankfulness is so great I'm not sure if i could express all of it. Thank you thank you thank you. I ...

I'm a beginner writer, and I'm trying to write a short story. Except the plot might be a little too big. I'm not sure how good or bad it's like ...