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Re: A Very Old Man
So sad, but it really actually brings back good memories for me. I really like it. Although there isn't much to look at, formatting wise, I think the lack of ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: In dreams.
This is a very good poem! It looks and sounds so much prettier in Italian though.. I wish I knew Italian. That's what my family on my mom's side is, ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: It Only Makes You Stronger
It Only Makes You Stronger Such a distance between us, --- 660 miles to be exact. I want so bad to be there, --- But things keep holding me back. ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: Battle
Battle 16 years on this Earth So why is she treated so much different than anyone else? Blonde hair. Blue eyes. Perfect on the outside. But on the inside, it’s ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: Some poems i've written
I really like all of the poems. I don't know how to really review them, there's alot to say. So i'll do a list of short points... -Repetition, love it. ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Why do we post our works?
My Creative Writing teacher asked us all to sign up for this site. She wanted us all to get help with our writings. I thought it was a good idea.. ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Purple
Good piece. It is very believable, explanatory, and shows lots of emotions. I also find it very relate-able, and really not one of those crazy "Oh my goodness. Somebody love ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: The Real Story
Floorboards creak under my heavy boots as I slide into the room from the window. I trip on something soft and am grateful to have caught myself. Such a loud ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: While Walking Home-
These pictures are both very good, but I reallyyyy like the first one. Take as many pictures as you can with light rays like that! I have tried for a ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: Let Me Know
This is awesome. Everything that, in my opinion, should be in a poem, is in here. I love the formatting and the words. It makes me think a lot, like ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: My lonely letter.
I think this is a great poem. The meaning of it, the idea of it being a letter, the emotions and the actions. All of it is very good. I ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Why I Write..
Okay so I had to write an informative essay on the reasons that I write anything in general. Not meant to be a poem, only an essay. I would like ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Why I Write..
Since the beginning of time, words have been used to communicate. Words that have been created and evolved to have many different meanings. And some time between the first word ...
Oct 12, 2011