mizz-iceberg

i voted monkey cuz i dont know Pat is....who is he?

Very sad. I had tears. I think this piece came from your heart, thats why it's so touching and 'moving'. Looking forward to reading more of you stories.

I think the chapter could be longer....maybe you can put more details about Annie's personality and tell the reader more about her. I like the idea of ending a chapter ...

I LOVE HP too!! :) enjoyed you writing!!