mizz-iceberg

Awsome! I love your style and your story...the whole Plot. There are a few grammar mistakes and some awkward wording but other than that i just love it! I can't ...

LIKE A TRUE YWS-ian BUCHANAN PRESPECTIVE.

A sausage car....hmmmm. cute poem ;)

Oh my goodness i just noticed i wrote "Azila is write" I'm so sorry I meant to write "Azila is right" ....can you believe me!! Of all places, YWS site. ...

Azila is write. The sentences are a bit too long at some places. I strongly believe in praising all good piece of writing. It really helps the writer. It sure ...

Omg so sweeet. Makes me think about all that my Mom has done for me. Thanks so much Rosie! (I guessing that's your name from reading your writing) I'm so ...

Haha!! Very funny and witty. That's so cretive. I never though about the witch's point of view. WOW. Very Very unique. Made me laugh!! Very clever!!

Very, fast paced. Something I was hooked till the end. I was a bit confused when the transition of your narrative style came. At first I thought this was a ...

Haha! I like it. It's amusing. Did you get your merit badge?

______________________ On the bottom of the small old wooden shelf up in my Grandma’s attic sat a small rusty metal box with a tiny lock on it. On the either ...

A very deep and thoughtful poem. You might want to read the first phrase of your poem again. You wrote 'is' twice. Other than that your poem is awesome.

long love Pat buchanan!!

The story s really intereseting and i can't wait to see how everything turns out. Post more!! You might want to divide your writing into paraghraphs. Maybe you can show ...

Our Home My life use to be tranquil, And at the same time exultant, Soft pearl like drops would wake me, Tapping my velvety emerald skin, Tap, Tap, tap I ...

YOUR LITTLE SON This is a letter to my father A letter to my mother, This a letter to my family, A letter to all those Who love me. I ...