mizz-iceberg

Wow! Beautiful and deep. I can't really find anything to crit. about. Is any of this based on reality? Just curious. -icy.

It says so many reviews because it's also counting the replies you posted yourself. hehe. It's too short right now, but I like it! great descriptions! I see you are ...

I like how you ended your poem. Great descriptions and characterizations. one line that seemed odd to me: This girl looks like shy type, This girl looks like the shy ...

Allright I edited it, tried to describe Milly's room better, corrected the typo's Roze pointed out. However I was having difficulty making one of my paragraphs flow smooother as PlusOne ...

OK I'll edit those typo's thanks for the crit. guys! And part of this actually happened to me. My older brother had used all my eye-shadow for fun, to make ...

Whoa, you had a lot going in this story. Some mistakes I shall point out though. So get ready for a nice long review. You don't have to make these ...

"Yes. Hortoogal...Horcotoogal?" My mom said as she switched the phone to her other ear, holding it against her shoulder. She thrust Piggy (he has some other name but I can't ...

Hope I win! ----------------------------------------------------------- The lonely shores of Kingston were an ultimately no-no place for all the kids of the neighboring town Surrey. I for one believed

ok Chocoholic I edited my piece and made the changes. Thanks for posting a reply. :) I haven't been getting very many reviews lately.

OK space your writing into smaller paragraphs. It's a huge chunk right now. I usually don't mind reading it that way, but not only are my eyes really tired right ...

Sorry but I didn't click on any of your links, too lazy. But your post made me smile. YWS is beginning to feel more Halloween-ish!! Have a biwitchingly, bloodcurdling, chilling, ...

This is actually a writing project I had back in 8th grade. I've saved it and I thought I might let people on YWS read it and tell me what ...

I tried to understand what the beings are. I couldn't. However I believe everything does not have to make sense in poetry. I am a strong believer in that, but ...

I have not read your previous chapters. I do have a lot to say about this one but I will first read the other ones and the let you know ...

Very beautiful and touching! I especially liked the first few paragraphs. Around the middle (forgive me for being so harsh) i started to get bored. However I read the whole ...