mizz-iceberg

Hello Cresent, Welcome to YWS! I am also a huge fan of J.K Rowling! And yes, smilies are quite awesome. My favourite one is this one: :elephant: The purple dancing ...

Hello! This is a very intriguing story, and you left it off at quite a cliff hanger. I'm anxious to see what happens next. Cliffhangers are a great writing technique ...

I haven't read your previous poem, but I will definitely check it out. I enjoyed this poem quite bit. It's short, simple yet very interesting. It kept my focus and ...

Hey there! First off, I'd like to say, this was really sweet story. I enjoyed the premise. I think the idea of exchanging hearts was very well thought off. I ...

Hello Little Devil! This poem was indeed visually appealing. Because of it's interesting format it kept me hooked. I truly enjoyed it. The thing that you can work on is ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! I like my sci Fi and fantasy. I prefer sci fi over fantasy, mostly because I haven't really read that many good fantasy books. What are ...

Hey Talya! Of course I'll review your work, and of course you'll have to return the favour. ;) That's what YWS is all about. Welcome aboard dear! Can't wait to ...

Hello! Heh, you've reminded me how good it feels to write a snide, biting, supercilious poem or letter to some people for certain reasons. I think this poem could have ...

Hi Melvin, What I like most about this poem is that it's focused. It stays on topic and flows well. As Grin mentioned above, it is intense. I like intense ...

Hey, Timmy! Interesting poem. But I could not tell they were supposed to be ghost, until you explained later on. So, you may want to make that part a bit ...

Hello! I'm Mizz Iceberg. :) I enjoyed reading this. The description was absolutely beautiful. It flowed quite well, except for in some places, where I felt it was rather choppy. ...

Welcome to YWS Angelbeeps! Pink has filled you in with the basic rules, but if you have questions or concerns, feel free to PM me! I look forward to seeing ...

Welcome to YWS Rachel! Nice to meet you. :) I'm mizz-iceberg. :) I have a pretty large family too. but, I'm never sure if I love having such a huge ...

Raindrops tapping the windowpane in multicolours, the sun shines through, beaming kaleidoscope specks on the mud coloured walls. Air gushes in all hues of blues and every shade of jade. ...

I am mizz-iceberg. Feel free to add me! :)