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OMG Evangelina, this is awesome! I had tears in my eyes while reading. I have nothing at all to crit about. I'm just so dazed and I realize what you ...

I was doing a bit of research for a friend of mine concerning fantasy writing. We had noticed that there were way too may Cliches in fantasy and that with ...

Sorry to say but I disagree with Perforated. No hard feelings I hope. I like your imagination and Alexial IS bit of a tougne twister but I really like it. ...

Haha this one was wayy funnier. I love your sense of humor. Something I can't really get into my writing. However I have tried to write comedy Check it out ...

Haha, funny and original. I laughed and said, “Oh you stupid knight! Always telling us how we look! I am not as blonde as you think! I can cook!” I ...

If it's though emial I'm totaly for it. Sounds fun! However I agree with everyone else about the risk of giving out your personal info.

Well I was hoping that I would scare my readers enough that they might hesitate before putting their hands atop a mouse. Haha. Glad you guys liked it. :)

Ok I altered quite a few things in your 'story'. Chapter 1: "Well here we are," said John, the leader of this group. "Yeah, but we stick out like a ...

Yes I thought this was based on reality. Because your feelings felt so real and your character's so strong. I really enjoyed this. I'm going to check out your portfolio ...

Ahh. More!! Post more. Waitaing for the next chapter. You really got me there. I thought David was kidnapping her for his own purposes...but it turns out it's for some ...

I really liked this poem however in some places I felt that you were putting in words just so your verse rhymes with the rest of your poem. It didn't ...

Under my covers, When sleep comes not, And the ticking of the Old clock does not stop, I shut my eyes real tight, Waiting to fall asleep. But my fridge ...

Really enjoyed this! You've written about a very common feeling that comes to most middle aged women entering their fifties. Their need to know if they are still as attractive ...

Ok I made the changes. I hope I win the contest.

Yes it's short and but It's not retarded... I actually think it's the proper length, if you wrote it any longer it would not be so perfect. Paints a nice ...