mizz-iceberg

First of great imagery. And you brought out the emotions very well. The kinks: the wind howl's at the mid-night moon as if you are still here. The rain patters ...

um to be honest, this is nothing too great. I mean it's not badly drawn or anything. But I can see you have a steady hand so keep practicing. Good ...

great! please continue!! I have a passion for different versions of fairy tales. and people above have pretty much pointed out the mistakes. And yes it's true giving birth to ...

Sometimes in the night Long after sunset And long before dawn When I am nice and snug In my bed I hear voices. Sweet melodious voices They call to me ...

Like Loose said, Wow. I loved it. I was sorta surprised towards the ending but I liked it. I rather enjoyed the story Weaver's grandfather told about the war. Characters, ...

I didn't get too fond of. I could almost guess the ending. Yes it's rather cliche but keep writing because your style is catching. Though I can guess how everything's ...

You really go me at the last line. It was short but it really hit home. I know some people didn't like the ending, But it made me laugh. I ...

I'm sorry if people found trouble reading this poem. I've tried to fix the spacing. What i meant by sort of scattering the words was that Life is not really ...

[pre]A painful searing in my head I'm f a l l i g Looking around all bright and DARK. My head hurts pathway, sometimes dark and at times happy and ...

Yes it doesn't make sense but its giving the reader an idea. It may not be logical....but it makes sense. Lol. Hard explain what I'm trying to say here. Like ...

It's all going too fast and gets confusing. Maybe you should try and space out your writing. "Cold surrounds me, envelops me, cradles me in its deceiving arms. Long icy ...

Great.!! I love how you conveyed the message without using foot long fancy words but in simple short words you expressed the feelings of many writers and people like me ...

Wow. This is beautiful. I found the emotions very vivid and the whole piece flowed very nicely. " I myself felt resigned to it as well, and I had thought ...

Dont know what to name it. Inner Peace or The Question I like Inner peace better. here we go: The millions of twinkling stars dotted majestically on the vast cloudless ...

Wrote this back in 7th Grade. My only poem that rhymes. Well actually I have other rhyming poems to but they're sorta nonsensical. XD I Am Who I Am Looking ...