mizz-iceberg

WELCOME ABOARD EMILY!! Hope you have fun here at YWS and get you some writing done! Need anything at all don't hesitate to PM me.

Like the multitudes of people above have already said, "THESE ARE SOOO CUTE!" Just plain adorable! I bet they tasted just as well. Oh man I want one too!!

When I feel strong or emotional about something and words come to my mind. Phrases that explain what I'm thinking. I just jot down whats in my head. Poetry is ...

Hello there! Great story you've got here. I hope you win the contest and you probably can, but there are a few things that I think you should fix before ...

Wow that's a really beautiful piece you've written here. I like these kind of stories. I agree with Azila, this piece probably belongs in the romantic fiction section. See if ...

Hey there Jabber! You definitely have hope in poetry! I liked this poem. It had great rhythm and also read very well. Great imagery. My favourite part was: No longer ...

I have to agree with BBB, there isn't much i can say about this poem. But its a nice, simple and thought provoking poem. I liked it.

I'm not too sure where I'm going with this. The story line's rather hazy to me. But I'd love some suggestions. .......... The oil sizzled and crackled has I dumped ...

I totally agree with KJ. I was really confused what was going on at the beginning and kept scanning the sentences, thinking I had misread or missed something. I think ...

Lovely! Great imagery. Good word usage and overall effective Christmas-y mood! I agree with Cade about the rhetorical questions. See if you can work that out. all-in-all I liked it ...

Good job! I agree with gryphon that the topic is a little overused but the poem was intriguing. However i did find it a little stretched. Like you repeated a ...

I don't exactly get what you mean by taking a photo by painting with light. Anyways I really like it though! I like the silhouette of this person and swirls ...

Yes i like the metaphor! It was rather cute and funny. Good use of words and description. I liked the feel and mood of this poem. And i can see ...

I loved the way you wrote this. And i liked your view on life. Also, I can see why you left out the names of the characters. Names weren't needed. ...

Oh I loved this!! I also viewed the sketch you made of Pierre. It went along with the description in your story quite well. Stella and Izzy pretty much pointed ...