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Re: ryhming isnt to hard is it?..
rhyming IS hard for me. But sometimes I do fine. Go through my profile and all my poems and you'll there are only a few that rhyme. Sometimes when people ...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: A First Attempt
I've been reading you work Jabber, I have to say it's quite fun. I love your poems!! KEEP WRITING!!!!
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: A little bit of madness
Haha thats a fun poem you've written here... Was slightly confusing at places... Y'kno I believe that every normal person is slightly insane. And if you're not then you're not ...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Finish The Sentence...
He got up and started jumping up and down because his tongue...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: The one and only mizz-iceberg
You seem to know what you like and don't like. Thats good. I am the opposite. If someone asks me what is my favorite color, even I know it is ...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: The one and only mizz-iceberg
just basically pasted what was written about me on my profile. lol. ABOUT ME: My older brother tells me they found me in a dumpster. My Mother disagrees. My father ...
Mar 30, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
8/10 it's rather thought-provoking. And I had to read it twice because the first time it just sorta went through me.
Mar 30, 2008 -
Re: Me, myself and I...
Hey Mima! i see that we have a lot in common. I think Chase Crawford's hot too! I know a girl from the Philippines. Well actually I know many people ...
Mar 30, 2008 -
Re: Curtsy
This piece was truly beautiful. I was completely absorbed! Ummm just a little something I noticed: I was walking around a quaint town with no particular name that I can ...
Mar 30, 2008 -
Re: A Star's Testimony (Somewhat Edited)
A Star's Testimony I was there when they split, when they made killing tools I was there to see them use the tools to kill each other And keep on ...
Mar 30, 2008 -
Re: Why?
I liked it! I'm not sure if its a poem or not. And it may read like a journal entry, but I didn't mind. I enjoyed reading it as you ...
Mar 30, 2008 -
Re: women
This was very well written and was beautiful. Good word usage and flow of words. But nothing new. We've all heard this before. I'm not saying its a topic that ...
Mar 30, 2008 -
Re: A Simple Peace
Your piece on peace is well-written. corny humor... This is all well written but I have to say I disagree with your meaning of Peace. I believe, to find peace ...
Mar 30, 2008 -
Re: Warmth, Sleep, Mother
Wow this is really beautiful!! When I read 'She invites me to her' I wasn't thinking mother, i was thinking more like bed partner. Lol. But yes later on my ...
Mar 30, 2008 -
Re: Short Story-ish
Yea I guess it's kind of a character sketch. But I'd like to continue and make this into a long short story. And I want it to be one of ...
Mar 29, 2008
