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I'm actually currently visiting Pakistan and have gotten to know many shiite's and am a shia myself. I'm hundred percent sure I can help you. here are some links: This ...

Wow this was really beautiful! I like your thinking and your ideas. I'm glad I came across this. Just one tiny problem that I found while reading this. You need ...

Hey Dustybutton!! Welcome to YWS. First off let me introduce you to some stuff on this site that you will find useful. Contact And Staff: Rules And Guides: Please, Please ...

Hah! The ending made me laugh. :lol: Good one! So true. Something not exactly like this but quite close to this happened to a friend of mine. Lets just say ...

I did not intentionally change the font, when I clicked 'pre' to keep the format the font automatically changed. I've changed it now so I hope it's better. For those ...

Yes I agree with you Nate. I have both on my computer, but when I open homepage from EI, it takes for ever and usually only loads the background, which ...

I just tested it. This rocks! Thanks Nate!

You want to know what I think? I think you and me would be perfect together. Hold my hand please, don’t be shy-- You, me, perfect. Except this perfect picture ...

..I wasn't too impressed. Put this in the non-fiction section titled "I'm angry and I have to let out my feelings" Because that's what this 'poem' sounded like to me. ...

Interesting poem. I read the title 'last kiss' and I thought it was going to be another one of those poems, extremely cliche. But I was wrong. This was wonderful. ...

Hey there! Welcome To YWS. I liked this poem. It had good imagery and the emotions well brought out. Now there were a few errors and that's why I'm here ...

Great job! I just noticed a bit of awkward wording, but other than that no biggies. To tell you the truth, when I found out this story was about werewolf ...

Everyone's pretty much already pointed out what I noticed. I like the way the dialogue in your writing, as it doesn't seem too awkward. Fix those grammar mistakes and you're ...

I have to say I loved this. I like how you explained about drugs through a 'story' instead of going on about the misuses of drugs. Is that what you ...

Something I wrote a while back. Thought I'd post here and see what people think Stop and Smile. I have but a sack on my back, And a branch for ...