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Thanks for the comment sealegs! I'm glad the poem captured your interest. :)

Formality We sit on her parlour sofas which were covered with sheets before my arrival. She sits opposite me, a tray of lemonade and pound cake not the only thing ...

Billy Collins Henry Longfellow Frost and Poe were already mentioned. Emily Dickinson

Quick, concise and to the point. Great article! It'll also be easy to remember. Thanks.

Thanks for the feedback Hannah! The question at the end didn't really work out I see. And I agree about the poem needing more texture.

I. This seesaw childhood that delicately balanced on the rock that he was is tipping over and I don’t know what to grapple. Colours blur, and voices pitch higher as ...

1985 Harris & Sons Plumbing 1990 Harris & Son Plumbing 1997 Harris Plumbing 2002 Harris Plumbing - For Sale. Do you see this as more of a short story or ...

Hey Esme! There's something very sober, and yet dramatic about writing written in the present tense. The piece has a dark, earnest appeal to it. Few nitpicks: The bell rings ...

Hey Kerza! (I like that name) Welcome to YWS! I found this story quite interesting. I think it's your characters that I most enjoyed, they're quite intriguing. They seem natural ...

On the long empty days when the breakfast table lay dismal, her chair vacant and the sun poured through the windows with good cheer, irritating me in it's stubbornness to ...

This is great! Awesome job everyone! :)

Hello Teevee! Welcome to YWS! I really enjoyed this story mostly because the characters seemed well fleshed out and I really like the premise of this story. The setting, the ...

Hi! That was quite eerie. You've managed to hook me, and I would very much like to read the rest. Thats an excellent way to start a story, to hook ...

Cal, you are so incredibly awesome! These are amazing songs, and quite spot on! Thanks you so, so much! I am seriously gloating right now. xD

First it is silent, the dust blows over the land in great threads, then she comes and spins out the orchestral melody from the sheer force of death itself, and ...