mizz-iceberg

Hey Chernobylly! I'm going to quickly point out the things I noticed. I would have done a nicer longer review but I'm in a hurry. I really enjoyed this story ...

Heyy Welcome TO YWS!!!!!!!! Selma, be sure to check out our Rules/Guides and FAQs as it'll help you out a lot! Yes, It is quite awesome to be able to ...

Hello, Anna!! Welcome to YWS!! My little sister once named a rabbit, Anna... Anyways, Casey is right, you'll have lots of fun here as long as you make sure you ...

Great job once again. Sela pretty much pointed out everything that I noticed. -Waiting for the next chapter...

HEYYY WELCOME TO YWS!!! I'm mizz-iceberg as you can see. I'm a greeter and I'm here to help you if you have any questions or need any help. I here ...

Hey! Welcome YWS Bebop! As Niteowl already mentioned, be sure to check out the sites Rules/Guides and FAQs. Don't hesitate to PM me if you have questions, Id be more ...

Hey Summerless!!! Welcome to YWS!!! I see everyone's pretty much already answered all your questions. But yes, this site can be quite confused. I remember when I was new... So ...

I agree with Stella and Kit, I would love to get to know your male character better. Other than that this was an extremely beautiful story. I love your style ...

Heyy Olive!! Welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll have loads of fun here at the same time improve your writing. If you ever have any questions, I would be super ...

Hey Jamie!! Great to see yuo're so excited. This place really is quite fun. I use pen to write most of the time too, its hard getting my thoughts on ...

Hey Huntress!! Welcome to YWS!!! If you have any question or need anything PM me and I'll see if I can help you. Be sure to check out the site's ...

You have great ideas in this poem and I see a lot of potential in it. The problem is the lack of rhythm and imagery. You need to make each ...

I liked this! It made me smile. Even though this poem was dripping with Cliche-ness it was creative and had originality. I've never quite read anything like this. The idea ...

Well I was thinking you were personifying fire as God mentioned. But you're post after that got me confused. It that's what you trying to show, then you need to ...

I agree, this poem has potential. If you want to call it a poem. I mean I like the idea behind it but you badly need to get more in ...