mizz-iceberg

Hello Robin. Welcome to YWS! I'm known as Mizz-Iceberg around here. It's great to meet you! If you have any questions feel free to PM me. I see that you ...

Hello There! Is this an excerpt of some sort? Well I rather enjoyed it as the emotions were well brought out and the bits of imagery were refreshing. The font ...

For Gadi's Contest. Please answer these question regarding my poem. -Does this poem flow ok? If it doesn't how can I make it so. -Punctuation. Please help me with it. ...

Hey, C.J!! Welcome To YWS!! Be sure to check out the Guides, FAQs and Rules. You'll find them under the About section. This site can be confusing for new members ...

Ohh pretty!! I'm a sucker for flowers :D. I specially liked the first one. The yellow in the middle is very bright and cheerful, though I don't like how the ...

Hey Cassie!! Welcome to YWS! i'm hunder 500 percent sure you'll have lots of fun here, at the same time be able to improve your writing and help others to ...

It's perfectly okay if you only write poetry!! Well, anyways Cat_Lover Welcome to YWS!!! And yes this site can get rather confusing for newbies. So if you need any help ...

Hey Kiwi!! Welcome to YWS!! Be sure to check to do two reviews before you post any thing of yours. And yes, make sure you check out the Guides and ...

Hello again. Ok I see what you mean by OMG, it makes sense now. So sorry about that. And if you feel the short sentences describe our emotions best than ...

Nice poem. I didn't find it too preachy though I think add more imagery and emotion to this piece. If rhyming the poem is causing a hindrance in anyway for ...

Cute. I could actually relate to this as I've often fallen for guys who are clueless to even what my name is :S. Overall I found the grammar okay. Just ...

Thanks Guys! CK: I understand what you mean by trying to ease the transition but I was clueless as to how to do it. Vernon: I took out many 'I's ...

Hey there! I usually don't read fantasy but this caught my eye and it was quite interesting. OK, let see, this piece here is in bad need of editing and ...

Sure thing! I'd like a review of this poem. I'm really proud of it but I've only got two reviews so far. I'll give you 5 points for it. Thanks ...

Hahahaha that was cute and refreshing! Very well written. Was this an actual assignment??