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Thanks for the review Elitehusky. I appreciate it. And I'm glad you liked the poem. =)

Hey there! Excellent poem. It has a great message about casting aside expectations and norms and ideals of the world and being who you really want to be, rising above ...

Hey Kylan! This story is brilliant. While writing from the eyes of a murder or criminal is nothing new, you managed make it fresh and interesting. I liked the detachment, ...

These days the words are conspiring shifty and slithery appearing innocent standing in wait for you then melting and dripping unfocused and hazy obscured insignificant as your eyes gloss over ...

Hey Dems! I adore this poem. Probably because I love your subject. Having recently read and fallen in love with Catcher in the Rye, I was taken in by this ...

Hey jemjive! At parts I thought the story was sweet, other times it just came off as very cliche and contrived, and there were bits I thought were quite clever. ...

Hi there! This is a very sad story. I love the concept. It's interesting that you kept it short. I'm not sure how I feel about that. On one hand, ...

Hey Gabriella! Initially when I read this poem I wasn't so sure I was going to like it. But as mybrokenreality pointed out, less is more. It's a very simple ...

Hey Josh! That's an interesting poem. And I like the topic too! Frustration is something a lot of us can relate to. However, I'm sure how you experienced it would ...

Hi Cherry Blossom Girl. Shall I call you Cherry? :) Welcome to YWS! You have an interesting condition. And I agree it would be a good idea to turn those ...

Hey papersolstice! I think this poem has a lot of potential. I do see where you're going with this. What this lacks is originality. "Why" is indeed a cliche and ...

Thanks Fizza!

Hey Jon! I like this poem. I like the rhythm it carries, and the thought provoking images. I also like the ambiguity in it. I feel I haven't fully grasped ...

Clever! Thanks Kamas. :)

Question! I can't figure out how to keep the format of a poem a certain way when posting (with the spaces and everything). When I post it, everything lines up ...