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Re: nvm 6
Hmm... the poem was very strong and understood right away what you were getting at. Nice choice of words by the way. However I didn't like the format too much. ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Shakes you warmly by the hand.....
Hello Shadobox! Yes I too adore your username! I think it's grammatical... I always spell similar, similiar. I guess I mix it up with familiar. OH yes do tell us ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Department Stores
Inspired from Picture Prompt 1 Department Stores Department stores made Danny feel uneasy, especially department stores in a mall. Talk about traffic. Danny shifted the empty basket from his left ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Banana
in a smoothie...yes!
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: What I Desire Most
What I desire most, to swallow is, the delicious mouthwatering smell Buried within books, which rustles out as pages are flipped. Treasured words pressed on precious paper. Wafting out from ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: Wikipedia
I one edited something on Wikipedia. I wrote Mariam is a farmer in Afghanistan, referring to my friend. It was just a joke, but it worked and stayed up on ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Predictions: The World in 2009
More pollution, population, war and economic crisis. Problems of the world are not going to cease in the year 2009, I highly doubt it. We may find solutions though. Tech ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Well hello there!
Hey Alyssa! Welcome to YWS! Hope you have lots of fun here. Or rather, I'm sure you will. I see the rules have already been introduced to you. Well, if ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Hiya!
Hello, and Welcome to YWS! I'm Zehra and I'm just a PM away if you ever need my help. Please make sure you check out the Guides, FAQs and rules ...
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: new
Welcome To YWS, Greg! Hope you have a blast here! Make sure you check out the rules and guides if you haven't already. ;) PM me if you need any ...
Dec 18, 2008 -
Re: like the first day of school!
Hello, welcome to YWS Robyn. Make sure you go over the rules and FAQs for this site. And try your best not to use chat speak. Try your best to ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: A Crime of Compassion
Hello, there! New Member, I see. Well welcome to YWS! :D Alright, I'm going to get right to your writing. I have attached my critique. Just click on download and ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: A Simple Mistake (Prologue) [edited]
Hello Oye! I have to say I really like this. It's a great way to begin something, but I do hope as this processes we see a little less internal ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Newbie here.
Hello! Welcome to YWS! Make sure you check out the guides, FAQs and rules, if you haven't already. People would love to review your work! I'm sure I would. Send ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Hey =D
Hey there! Welcome to YWS!!! Please check out the rules, guides and FAQs if you haven't already. Hope you have lots of fun here. PM me if you ever need ...
Dec 3, 2008
