mizz-iceberg

Hi guys! Name: Isaac Age: 18 Gender: Male Appearance: Isaac is skinny and short with bright mischievous eyes and an expressive pair of eyebrows. He looks younger than he is, ...

Makes me think of a fantasy story of a bunch of people with magical powers...or magic objects. They work together using their powers to overcome the adversity facing them. I ...

Hi Ranger Hawke! Rhyming poetry can be fun, but it really restricts a writer's word choice. Remember poems don't have to rhyme. Seeing as you don't write lot of poetry, ...

These are gorgeous! 1 -- I'm not sure what this is. Is it a blanket? Regardless, I love it. The focus and shadows are perfect. 2 -- Meh. I don't ...

Heyl! I like the simplicity of the poem. However, I think you should work on your word choice. Rather than using words like "sad", "glad" and "kinda", use more descriptive ...

Hi Coral! It's me again. =) Dude, I love your writing. I won't really be able to comment much on the plot because I feel you're going to add more ...

Hey Persephoneia! I like this poem a lot. The speaker's candid attitude and honest acknowledgement through out the poem was enjoyable. The repetitive use of words like "yes" and "yeah" ...

Hello Flower-Child. You have some powerful images in this poem! I really liked: Saving you, was like fighting off hundreds of soldiers with a single feather. However, if you got ...

Hi! Could you please review this poem: Piano Playing Days ? Thank you!

The spidery fingers from his piano playing days hold the brush with a grace; the paint wipes itself on the grainy wood, his hand only guiding yellow paint of summer ...

Hey Elinor! I'm Mizz Iceberg. Nice to meet you. This is an interesting story. I feel I have to read more of it to get a better idea of it, ...

Hey Jagged! I'm Mizz Iceberg. Nice to meet you. :) I like this poem. Your use of imagery and metaphors is beautiful. The amount of details and emotions in the ...

Hello! Here as promised. The story is a little messy right now. There are lots of grammar and punctuation errors littered about. The pace is too fast and we don't ...

Hey Face Engine! I think I reviewed another poem of yours just a while ago. I like this one better, though. I would like to contradict with the above reviewers. ...

Hi! I'm Mizz Iceberg. Nice to meet you. :) I can see where you're going with this poem, but I don't think it's working. The poem seems like a list. ...