mizz-iceberg

I really like this! Especially the second half of it. Just a few quick suggestions: You started the chapter very well! I was right away hooked and and very interested. ...

Personally, I think the technology is something wonderful, but it's just that it's so easy to misuse it. Imagine if genetic diseases could be avoided! But the human race has ...

New member I see! Welcome to YWS! Now over all, I like the first chapter. As to whether its original or not, I can't say because I don't read much ...

A good book actually stimulates my imagination. Whereas when I haven't been reading for a while and I try to write, my writing is slow with little originality and little ...

Scientists can influence what genes or traits are passed on to future generations, thereby, impacting the course of evolution. In the near future scientist may be able to alter the ...

Glad you liked it, Music Girl. Alright guys I made the changes. I think it's much better.

Welcome Blue Giraffe! No you're not the only one who thinks that emotion looks weird. It's supposed to look like a laughing face, but... Another NaNo-er! I won it too, ...

darky.demark and gyrfalcon I agree the 'of's are distracting. I was actually trying to give it an abstract feeling, but I see it didn't work, so I'l definitely change that. ...

An icy chandelier sparkling maliciously in the yellow glow suspended heavily, mightily in midair. A party of talkers, clinking of delicate china, wheezy laughter of a goner. Breaking law, time, ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! Well if you're looking for critiques or reviews you've come to the right place. BUt make sure you critique others' works before posting your own your ...

I won't say I'm being sentimental if I prefer reading books in the actual paper form. It feels more natural and its easier on the eyes too. I also have ...

Welcome to YWS! My poetry is not all that great either, but I refuse to stop writing and bug YWS-ers by posting it. Though I don't think they get bugged, ...

Hello and Welcome! No I'm sure it gets better. So out with it! Tell us more about yourself. I mean, strangely enough we ALL like to write, so there must ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! It's okay to be random, but if you are in a bad need of points, I suggest that you review, not lengthen your post just ...

Many problems are caused by differences. In other words "Differences cause too many problems." Does that mean there should be no differences? If the concept of religion never existed it ...