mizz-iceberg

Ah this is so very helpful. Thank you!

April 3rd Luminous rain drops, made from faint memories that form dreams. Try as you may to grasp them from the air, and keep them tightly in you fist, but ...

Hey Kylan! So I read through all the chapters today and I'm really relishing this story. The characters, your words, the incidents, they all go along so well. As I've ...

I want everyone to know that I hate this sentence, too. But I couldn't find anything better that could tie together the main idea of the story. I would love ...

Bharat Her red skirts a flurry of movement, Keeping in tune with the rhythm of her feet and the tinkling of the delicate bells Wound around her skinny ankles. Drunken ...

April 1st: Alive Still The livid winds blowing about. Each breath of earth, of stinging dirt, A sharp slap in the face. Each step a courageous feat, to battle on, ...

Mizz Iceberg's NaPoWriMo Thread! April 1st: Alive Still April 2nd: Bharat April 3rd: Untitled April 4th: Never Say Never April 5th: Making Plans April 6th: The Peanut Wala April 7th: ...

Definitely Excited! :D

I find that funny ;) Why be negative about something when it can easily be seen as positive, y'know?

Hey there Kylan! Few nitpicks first: It is cold and hard to the touch I like how you add those sentences after each paragraph, but I did not like that ...

Ah Kylan, this is beautiful! He smokes a cigarette. It is cold, but he has his sleeves rolled up to his elbows. He always keeps them rolled up. It keeps ...

Very interesting! I would like to read more. It's very short, so I don't have much to comment on, just the fact that I like the idea of having a ...

Welcome to YWS! Yupp, I recommend Script Frenzy! Don't worry, if you're an active member, you'll figure out this site right away and make lots of friends at the same ...

Welcome to YWS! We have some great poets, who I'm sure would be more than happy to help you with your poetry. I too am a struggling poet. I haven't ...

Please be mindful that "Lyric Poetry" does not necessarily mean Lyrics. Meaning, this is not the place for songs. "Lyric poetry expresses the wishes, the hopes, the joys, and the ...