mizz-iceberg

Hello! Is this a first part to a longer continuing story, or is this it? It would help me as a reviewer if I knew this. The whole world had ...

I'll try my best to come!

Zeus

Alligator meat -- stuck between her teeth. (Who's eating who now?) Haha. I love this! And also this one: I dreamt of the wide blue sky -- until an airplane ...

for april 9th The Orange The orange is a fruit with many unpleasant qualities, quite like loose pebbles in one's shoe: Plump and bitter seeds, and the strong odour of ...

I'm not too fond of the next two poems, but they were all I could up with. I hate forcing myself to write poetry. For April 8th Spring Spring crawls ...

I really like the last one. It rouses some very pleasant memories. On thing I'd like to point out: I watch the rain, tumble down, the windows, and fall. I ...

I adore your first two poems! The sun is casting his late-day-rays, On the barren fields of hope. What happened to the promises, That were meant to flourish here? Delicious! ...

Hello! I think you have nice ideas here, but you need to find a better choice of words and use them to capture just the perfect images. Incorporate some strong ...

Hi Slash! Welcome to YWS. I'm Zehra. I can see you don't like to talk much. Do you now? Or are you just shy? '"Hi!" doesn't tell us a lot ...

Hello there! Let me just point out a few things, then I'll let you know what I think of your story overall. The average person spends 7 years of their ...

Congrats Springrain! :smt038 :smt041 :elephant:

for April 7th I think. Lost count of date. I'm falling behind aren't I? Well, here's another one: Choices When you look over your shoulder And those frozen footsteps look ...

The wind whined, mosquito-voiced. Not too fond of 'mosquito-voiced'. Can't really conjure it and it becomes annoying. The burning buildings shimmied. The rain evaporating, hissing like loose gaskets.

Hey Kylan! I'll get right to it. Mathis seems to be only sane one. and tension is definitely building This was an okay chapter. Not the best to be honest. ...