mizz-iceberg

Welcome to YWS, Kid! It's great to see you've got the main rules down. But, I still suggest you go through the FAQs, Guides and Rules if you haven't already. ...

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

Floss

Spot on Zinnia! Except I don't have a long nose. :D ... Ah, you again. XD Light brown hair -- mid length, and hazel eyes. Cheerful, friendly and hyper.

Hello! You have a great story plot here. And on the whole it's quite entertaining. there are many grammar/punctuation/spelling mistakes through out the story. I am not going to point ...

Hello! Interesting poem, and I can see you have some sort of philosophical concept. But it needs a little something, and I'm here to help. First lets get the nitpicks ...

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

Green skin, likes to 'ribbit', large black eyes and a wide smile. And very jumpy. ;)

Hello! Interesting poem. The flow is nice, and the words sit together well. Imagery imagery is not a must, but I highly, highly recommend it. Can't stress it enough. Use ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! Yes, YWS is a great place to hone writing. Glad to see you joined. You will definitely improve your writing and help others improve theirs. Make ...

:wink: Welcome to YWS! I hope you're having fun. Be sure to check out the FAQs and guides around the site. This link should be of great help. Make sure ...

Haha, this is brilliant! My favourite part: Warning: We are not responsible for any negative modifications this book may have on your behavior. Side effects include maniacal laughter and repetition ...

Hello Bubbles! I need major poetry help... Title: The Story of the World (cliche much?) Genre: Other Poetry Thanks in advance!

Hello Stella! Could you please review this poem for me? I'm not too proud of it and I need some help. Thanks in advance!

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