mizz-iceberg

Great stuff Angel! I've noticed your beginnings are week, but the endings are very strong. It is sometimes rather difficult to really get into the writing, and by mid length ...

Great stuff Angel! I've noticed your beginnings are week, but the endings are very strong. It's is sometimes rather difficult to really get into the writing, and by mid length ...

Hello Angel! The beginning of the story was good, it caught my interest and I wanted to keep reading. In the beginning of the chapter I did not like your ...

Hello Angel! The beginning of the story was good, it caught my interest and I wanted to keep reading. In the beginning of the chapter I did not like your ...

Hello again! Great to see this isn't in caps. ;) Interesting poem here, but I'm afraid I don't quite get the message. But that's okay. I don't have to get ...

Hello! I'm going to ask you first to change the case of your poem. Lower case, would be much, much better. Please don't ever write in caps. It's a rule ...

Heya Rosey! Could you pretty please critique this for me? Letters to The Dead Romantic Fiction Written for Cal's contest. Aaand the link is right here: You rock Rosey! -Zehra

Hello Sophie! YWS is a wonderful place to get honest, unbiased opinions regarding one's writing. Though at first some reviews may seem slightly harsh, I wouldn't worry about it. we're ...

Eeek! Okay, I'm just gonna squeel for a bit, because I absolutely looove the Beach Boys, and I love your writing, so this story couldn't have been better. ^^. This ...

This is for Cal's Some Kind of Chorus Contest . Word prompt: catharsis Song: The Decemberists --The Engine Driver Elizabeth Spry walked away from the cemetery, the train of her ...

Hello Corey, Welcome to YWS! I like your enthusiasm. ^_^ But, YWS is a place to be enthusiastic about. I hope you're liking it so far. If you have any ...

Ah, yes that spell check button is awesome! But if you use Firefox it has a built in spell check so you can always keep your spelling in check. When ...

Vernon! Welcome back! =)

Hello! Welcome to YWS! New member I see. Why don't you introduce yourself over at the Welcome Forum? I'm going to be reviewing your poem today. Lets get started on ...

Hello! I'm going to review your poem today, Lets get started on the nitpicks first. You make feel like I worth a while When I'm sad you make smile You’re ...