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Done! Anyone else?

Here by request! =) I have not read the reviews posted before me, so if I repeat anything, forgive me. Lets first start on the nitpicks. She remembered the words ...

Title: Sentient -Part One Genre: Other Fiction This is part one to a story of three parts. I will eventually post the other parts. If you could please have look ...

Alright so I decided to create a thread for review requests. What I'm willing to review: Fiction Non Fiction Scripts I'm iffy about poetry, but I shall try my best. ...

Flute! So, remember I said I want you to have a look at something? here it is! I'll give you cookies! Thankssomuch. -Zehra.

Song: Burton Cunnings --Break it to Them Gently Word: Exodus ... Fifteen He had been a boy, naïve, enthralled by everything that lay in the outside world. Restless. With each ...

Hello Conrad! Dana nodded. “In it’s own horrible way, it’s beautiful.” It's should be its. You've got the second it's right. ‘ God doesn’t want to see us, ’ Rob ...

You rock, Mars! I made all the changes you suggested. Thank you so much for looking through the story and being so helpful. ^_^ -Zehra

Tithe by Holly black. I absolutely hated that one. It made very little sense, and all the main character ever does is swear and smoke. there's no depth to any ...

Thanks Antigone! I made those changed. As for those sand dunes. I watched a movie once, where a group of people hid in the shadow of a large sweeping sand ...

Heya Mars! Could please review a short story I wrote? It's rather rusty and unpolished. I'd like an in depth review. The link: Thank you very much! -Zehra

Hello! Title- Some Mettle for His Virility Link- Genre- Romantic Fiction Word count- Under 1,350 Summary- A short story written for Cal' contest. About a boy travelling the deadly Erobus ...

Welcome to YWS! I'd like to request you to change the case of your work, Lowercase would be much better. Caps give the feeling of yelling or being shout at. ...

This is for Cal's Some Kind of Chorus Contest. Word prompt: tragic hero Song: Tom Petty --Learning to Fly The desert sun blazed, blowing its hot breath on Adan’s back. ...

Haha! I love it. =)