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Re: Hey Sarah, if you can read this, it's Dante
Aloha Dante! I love the name Dante. You how sometimes names represent certain types of personalities for us? For example, when I hear the names Anges, Agatha, Molly or Barbara, ...
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: Mizz's absolutely free reviews!
Fortuna and TeenQueen, I'm sorry but I think I'll be able to review your writing just yet. As for you Megan, yours is done. I'm very sorry guys but I'm ...
May 31, 2009 -
Re: When Death Comes A'knocking.
Song: Body in a Box --City and Colour Word: oracle ..... It was Friday, a cold, windy and hostile Friday when Saleem received the letter. He hadn’t expected it at ...
May 31, 2009 -
Re: Hurting -- Chapter One
Hola Sinorita! Here by request! Very interesting story here. I like how you've got a rich kid and then a poor kid and you compare their lives. However while reading ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: The Gate
Hello Rosey! Like the other I do like the child's perspective. However, I still can't really click with the MC. I think it's because since you're doing first person, the ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Rosey's reviews
Hola Senorita! Here is the link to Sentient II: Much thanks in advance. -Zehra
May 30, 2009 -
Re: HAPPY BIRTHDAY, NATEY-POO!
Happy Birthday! Have a great day! Best wishes, -Zehra
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Sentient II
Song: This One's for the Girls--Martina MicBride Word: Agora ... Thirty He’d been a man, a young but mature man. The dazzle of Septa paled into actuality and a routine ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: Mizz's absolutely free reviews!
I hope you can give me a few days for that one. My life's suddenly been going really crazy. But I promise I'll get to it. Maybe within 2-4 days? ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Hello Everyone :)
Welcome to YWS Time Keeper. I'll just call you TP. Sound good? Honest reviews are most welcome here. I hope you checked out the fantasy and sci fi literary forums, ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Fog Around the Mountain Top
Large and majestic, Beautiful, commanding, Resting on the earth. Their wisdom budding in the leaves, The grass, the trees that climb up their sides, Towering up, up, above the clouds. ...
May 17, 2009 -
Re: Sentient
Rosey, you are absolutely awesome. I'm going edit this story by tonight, according to your suggestions. Thank you so, so , so much! Can't wait for the overall part!
May 16, 2009 -
Re: Make a Story :)
Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
I rather liked Turnabout. True, not her best work, but still not the worst book. I'm also a bit of a fan of The Giver. But everyone's entitled to their ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Rosey's reviews
Rosey! You're great at getting to the reviews quickly! This one I'd like to reqest a special in depth review if possible. Tear it apart completely. This story is the ...
May 13, 2009
