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Re: Narrative Essay on an Abusive Relationsip
A/N: Hey guys! This is an essay I wrote for class. The topic we were given for the essay is: “The despair of youth with limited opportunities is the major ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Hands
Coral -> Thanks for the suggestions! I'll edit the story asap. Tommy and Shion -> You guys are so sweet! I'm glad you liked it. :)
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Rattles
Hey! I love this Coral! You've got a great flow of strong imagery and powerful descriptions going on through out the poem. There was also a twisted sense of humor ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: Hands
Hands These are my hands. I lay them open before you, vulnerable, honest; because you need to see them. Can you see these lines? The creases of hard work and ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: Better To Have Loved And Lost?
Hey Light Devil! This story has an interesting concept. However, I felt there was something off with the voice. The narrator seemed more angry at the people who say that ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: The Troupe
Isaac Mouse was driving me crazy. All her ferocity, her anger seemed to be drilled on me. I wanted to throw my mop in her face and flee the place. ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: The Troupe DT
I won't be here all weekend so I won't be able to post. Happy story booking to the rest of you!
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: Shuffle That Playlist!
I like Elton John and Kings of Leon, but haven't heard of the rest. But they must also be good. 8/10 All I Want is You - Juno Soundtrack Marching ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: Shuffle That Playlist!
7.5/10 I quite like I:Scintilla. Stolen Babies are also really cool. :) I haven't heard the rest though. The Handshake - MGMT 20 Years of Snow - Regina Spektor Ireland ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: The Troupe
Kaywiia: Sure! I hope this works. Isaac "Oy! What a darn idiotic thing to pull off," Julian growled. "You looked you wanted to kill her." "I do!" I yelled. What ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: The Troupe
Isaac Mouse threw a rather disgusting looking mop at me. I scrambled to catch it. Did she have to express her hatred towards me in her every movement? I huffed ...
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: A Morning's Thoughts
Hola Coral! Here as promised! I have to say, I really adore this piece. Rain is my favourite weather. Actually I'd prefer a deliciously moody, rainy day over a sunny ...
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: The Troupe
Isaac Isaac's feet were falling asleep. They felt like a million ants were crawling over them. He shook them slightly. No good. He jumped up to shake them and get ...
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: The Troupe
Isaac Scowling, Mouse shoved the door. She yelped as the can of paint came tumbling down on her, splattering her head and shoulders with paint. She cursed loudly and whipped ...
Aug 27, 2010 -
Re: Title Feedback
A coming of age fantasy novel about a girl/boy with the ability to control the wind. The main character learns about his/her skill and develops it through out the novel. ...
Aug 27, 2010
