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Re: Park Bench Pageant
Hey there, Inkwell! I love this poem for many reasons. I love the smooth flow of it, the way each line flows so smoothly into the next and the words ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: there she inscribed
A/N The lack of punctuation and capitalization is intentional. I think without the punctuation, the poem a swift flow. Opinions greatly appreciated as always! :) I hush, cry your bitter ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: to the ducks swimming in ditchwater
To the ducks swimming in ditch water: I apologize, extending these hearty palms towards you on behalf of my brothers and sisters speeding and crashing around us both. Believe me ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: An Empty Stoup
Heya Perse! I love how whenever I drop by the forums there's always something new and delicious by you. I agree very heartily and passionately with the subject and theme ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Visiting Modernity
... Your return was on a dark night, when the fireflies of modernity dotted the night and it wasn't silent because it was the night of today. Your children were ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Reviews galore! (Open for Business)
A customer! *tackles Coral" Ahem. So! Your review shall be ready by tomorrow evening! xD
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: The 2010 Statistics
My favourite part: 3.29 review to work ratio YWS is incredible.
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Starlight
Hi! Coral, that was breathtakingly beautiful! I really have nothing to critique here and my review will be just gushing and praising. First let me say this, I love the ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: I Want My Childhood Back
Hey Ehte, I found this poem chillingly familiar to an Indian song I know called Wo Khaghaz ki Kashti (That Paper Boat). Here are the lyrics in English. I'm wondering ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Snow Adrift
Ahoy there! (get it? xD) I couldn't really find much wrong with this poem. I thought it was refreshingly beautiful. However, I would like to point out a few things. ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Pick the color of my UKULELE
Wood. Then you can paint it and draw designs on it the way you want.
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Reviews galore! (Open for Business)
Hi! I'm Mizz Iceberg. I'd love to do a review for you. :) I will try my best to hand out the reviews as promptly as possible. What I'm willing ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Hello Pink! Could you please have a look at this for me. Thank you very much!
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: You died, tonight.
The ending made me gigglesnort. I have felt that way, way to often. I love how it was utterly, and absolutely cliche in the beginning--or so I had thought. The ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Thorns & Roses [1.1]
Hey Pink! Let me just first get down to the few things I had a problem with. I'd like to understand Kevin a little better. I think you could describe ...
Dec 31, 2010
