miyaviloves

Chapter one Yori made his way down the busy London street. Even after years of living in the busy capital of England he still found it strange how every person ...

Prologue 05/07/01 I swear that if he ever does it again I will tell. Marcus Reddaman is his name and I hate him. 06/07/01 He did it to them again. ...

I really love Kingdom Hearts and i think you got Axel's character just right and you even got his quote "Got it memorized" in well done! Im currently working on ...

I really like this, im finding your work very unique and deep, but yesi agree maybe it should be in the poetry section :) BUt very well done to you ...

I do have more but i didnt want to post it all in one go as it is quite long, i also left out the prologue which needs to be ...

Well i wanna read more! It seems to be the beginning of a very interesting story. Post more!

Prologue Armadiel smiled at the devastation he had inflicted on the worthless people around him. Pain and suffering was what he lived for, and he was going to bask in ...

This is a really good poem, but made me feel kinda...empty? Your writing is very similar to my friends, its quite a unique style however and your very talented!

Aww thats really sad, but i really like this, its simple yet effective, well done i hope to see more!

This is a very good story although i ofund it quite sad, kids even teenagers can be so cruel, i like the style you write with, is there goijng to ...

He stopped. This surely couldn’t be the right place: no one could or would live down here. Or so he thought. “Form Street”. This was the place. The male turned ...

A really cute story i liked it alot, although i do agree with other comments that the ending could use some work but other than that well done a very ...

this is very good as you said you only wrote this when you were 12! i really like your style of writing, could you PM a link to some more ...