miyaviloves

Ooo i really like this! Its very different to other poems i read, keep up the good work!

Not the best xpoem i have seen on this site but it is an impressive peice of writing, and i do like it, although the wording could use some work, ...

This is very good! Im sp impressed that you are only nine and already have this level of writing under your belt, your one to look out for!

This is rather sad but i do like it, and are you really 9? This is impressive for a 9 year old! Well done anyway

I loved the film and i think you did really well keeping it to the original story, i attempted writing a fanfiction for Spirited away but i could quite get ...

?! Where is the rest of the story?! YOu must finish this, i was really getting into it stops :\ I really love this, although like everything it could use ...

I have heard a few things like this, especially from my little cousin in the car when we are going on a family outing!

Chapter one “Cloud? I guess your busy…Barret called, he says that you never got back to him the other day. Anyway, I guess you should call him, let me know ...

I like this, bought a smile to my face, good job :)

This is very sweet. This poem reminds me of school soo much, and i really love this!

I agrew with gyrfalcon i have seen that he posts things that are just of no use he dosent even leave any positive things! If he has something bad to ...

Wow this is really good and i cant say anything you need to improve on. I will say this is one of the best poems i have read, well done

Short and sweet. And very true.

this is good, but is the Title 'My favourite things'? Cos if it is i would reccomend changing that cos of theconnection with The SOund of MUsic lol, but yes ...

This isnt junk so dont throw it out *Looks at comment above* It made me feel sad, but i think that your work is very different and i really like ...