miyaviloves

Too short i kinda felt like it should be part of something more? Other than that its very good, but maybe add it onto something?

I like how it all flows together. I love it!

This is weird. Well they do say that talking to yourself is the first sign of madness! :)

This is very strange! BUt i liked it, its very different to anything i have EVER read, although there dosent seem to be much of a story to it?

I get in the mood to write like when im thinking about my stories and i think of all these new characters and such and sometimes it leads to me ...

I did like this, although reading through it, i do think that you could make it much better than it already is. What is the pain that you are talking ...

Reno fiddled with his long red hair as Rufus rambled on about something he was completly uninterested in. Tseng sighed as his friend took no intesrest in the topic, and ...

This is a vewry good peice of work, but i owuld like to see mroe charcter description, or charactrer history, to know a little more about Max maybe? And is ...

This poem made me feel really..cold? It seems very deep and really emotional, well done its extremly good

This is very good, is there a message in it? Even if there isnt i xreally liked it, and im now gonna go read more of your stuff :)

This is good, although i would like to see more description of the characters. Do you have any more?

This is good although i think the ending could use some work. I liked how you added in ex tra description of his life (The dating part) to add more ...

I really do love this, you writing is amazing end of :)

This does read like a poem, and its original, well done, a good read

I think that you writing it as an animal as the main character is one of the most interesting approaches you could write, thats why i love this so much ...