miyaviloves

strait - straight :D And Seth :) one of my favourite names. Ok, this is good, but the first part sounds a bit like "and he did this, then this ...

Oh i like this, its somewhat mysterious, i especially love this: Stumpy chimney, Marred with dark soot, But no smoke here cuts the air. Is thius about a house that ...

Sappy My first day of high school was not a pleasant one. I was now eleven which meant I had to start a new school, new faces, new rooms, new ...

I can relate to this! Im not fond of haiku's in all hoensty but i liked this, it bought a smile to my face :D miyaviloves

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p.s. dont beg for posts, it had only been ten minutes, give people time!

I liked this, it has a good flow and the rhyming was not out of place, well done i really like this! no wait i love it :D miyaviloves

Duffy, i especially like Havisham shes very good, although i do like Armitage also, i studied them both for English, but i did enjoy Duffy much more.

Wow i really liked this, sort of reminded me of something that James Blunt might sing. Like Princess said, add punctuation and you will be onto something very very good ...

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i agree with cadmium, from what i see you have posted many little 'poems' and expect replies as soon as you post them, your new and need to get established ...

hmmm.....are you posting this just to get replies? to be honest, it sounds like you have just puushed a few words together

I liked this, althought when reading ijust one line didnt seem to flow: The salty sea smell is carried in the air I dont know why, maybe i am reading ...

Thanks to you all for taking your time to read through this! Claudette, you have pointed out things that i wasnt expecting people to figure out so quickly! He dosent ...

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