miyaviloves

Opening Credits This is how we Walk on the Moon - Aruthur Russel Waking Up Sweet Escape - Gwen Sefani First Day of School Aim Snap Fall - The Spill ...

My name is Jamiy, umm, i dont really have a quest, I guess If i did it would be to have a better life than my Moms, but that wont ...

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I agree very much with Liz, this isnt particulary poetic, although I'm not one to talk I'm terible with poetry! Even so, i didnt really enjoy reading this in all ...

Well, you seem to have loads of reviews on this already, but since i read it i will say my peice :D Ok, i wont point out mistakes now as ...

I think that the crit group is a good idea, and i would be happy to review some of your stuff! I agree with the chapter thing, i think its ...

I tend to get attached to my characters, even when they are supposed to be the bad ones i love them for some unknown reasons. Although i have been known ...

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I have been reading this all along, but havent commented yet, not sure why :S Anyway, i LOVE it, but i also thought it was a flashaback at first. Anyway ...

Lancrist pointed most of the errors out here. Like i said to you, reminded me of 300! I loved it, i loved reading it, it was exciting and i will ...

Only thing wrong Skell has pointed out here. I really like this, its original and i think it was quite heartfelt, i wasnt too sure if that was what you ...

^^ edited this bit, changed her name because i didnt think Mel worked. Also posted number 5 but its rated so it wont be on the main page. Jules, thanks ...

Just so you know, I wont be posting this again for a while, I figure i need to work on the first bits again, so let me know if you ...

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I just Finished Running with Scissors and Possible side effects and now starting Dry, all by Augusten Burroughs hes amazing!