miyaviloves

Well, I'm not sure why but that made me want to cry? I'm really not one for poetry but i have fallen in love with this peice, its original and ...

I thought that i had commented this but i just realised i went onto another web page and forgot to post it! Oops! Anyway as i was saying in my ...

oh and Canned Beans will be no more! I have finished with that :\ I was stuck on where its going, unless you have any suggestions on it i will ...

thanks Alainna Oh i know i name things confusinly, it goes (from my portfolio) 1 Ice Cubes Ice Cubes #2 Ice Cubes #3 2 Ice Cubes #4 Ice Cubes #5 ...

This is just a tiny bit of Ice Cubes I decided to post this before the rest of the chapters :S I'm not sure why but hhaha there you go ...

Im afriad i also have to agree with Seig, this was way too repetative, but ther than that i quite liked it. A bit of editing and it could be ...

Wow, i really liked this, but im not sure if you should extend it, unlee you feel you have more to say? Im not one to point out problems with ...

Ok i really like this :D However, is this a second aprt of like have i missed some of it?? Im a bit confused with all the characters, like Orpheus ...

Oh dear...

How how how how HOW did i miss part two?!?! *goes to read it*. Ok i am back :D. Rightyho, First things first, i LOVE this, ohhh yess i do! ...

The day after my Mom got arrested Rob decided that he would invite his ‘date’ over for dinner, to avoid any more trouble. When the door opened this time I ...

Hmm, In all fairness I'm not too sure if i liked this as much as your other stuff. You used the word 'wall' too much in the first bits of ...

Taken down due to publishing

I like how this is talking to the reader, and the topic is good, but i feel that some of the lines are a little cliche such as: To ease ...

My Mom gave me away, and i never met my dad, so i guess not. ~ Jamiy If you were in a band what would you do? (Sing etc)