miyaviloves

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I agree with Reida they are very cute! Its really emotional, you have a way of getting the reader so attached to the characters! Look forward to reading more! Meevs ...

This is good, very mysterious. I especially like the opening stanza, its very effective. And the last lines are also very very good, i like this alot, well done. Meevs ...

Wow, i really loved that, it sounds so calm in such a crazy atmosphere? I think your writing style is very unique, its almost poetic and beautiful. Well done, amazing! ...

I like how you write with such emotion, but I dunno, I didnt really like this very much. I think its a little cliche, i may be wrong. But i ...

Ok, i will be honest,i did not read all of this, can you separate it up anymore? It would be much easier to read that way. Even so, i LOVE ...

I agree with Mimi and Alainna, this is a wonderful peice, i prefer this to some of your other stuff. Oh and it is spelt wrong, should be heat right? ...

I cant say i have read Dark Materials. we studied Phillip Pullman at highschool though, he seems like a very interesting man! Meevs x

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I realllllly hate Dr. Haaser >.< The end part of this once was really sweet, I just want JOn out of there, he isnt crazy and ohhh its frustrating me ...

Gah Kyle better be real, I think he is though anyway I'm off to read #28! Meevs x

I have to agree with Cadmium about not really getting it, its a very well written poem, but I'm just not sure if it really means anything to me. You ...

I cannot answer that question, It would depnd on the type of writing desk of course. *why is there never enought time?*

Hmm, this is strange lol. What exactly is it, dont mean to sound rude? Is it part of a story or is it just something you felt like writing? What ...

Ok, i liked this, but this may sound a little weird, you could make it a bit longer and use more 'claustrophobic' words...if you get me there? I had an ...