miyaviloves

Will have to agree with Ofour on that one :S If you post loads of things at once people won't bother to read them all (like I havent) I notice ...

Hey :D Thank you both for the replies, it is very much appreciated! Cheri- Thanks, I am going to add more to this, elaborate the characters more, i feel it ...

*is Happy because lot's have been posted* Yay for reaching the fifty page mark! And it's 50 pages of an actual good story, some people just write and write just ...

I can't believe that now her friends have turned on her?!?!?! Gosh, this is such an emotional story, I'm amazed that you can write it so well! Meevs x

OH it's just so sad, I feel so bad for Jamiy feeling the guilt of it all when really it was his own fault, yet its all fallen back on ...

8/10 its pretty :D

Ok, i liked this but I'm not sure what its about really. Great range of vocabulary and yes a very mature sounding poem. Just not realllly completly sure of the ...

Um, yes a new story? Bit of a bland beginning, I'm not happy with it, but I just don't know :S i need suggestions, help? **************************************************** Stars I wish that ...

Er ok lol that was strange, but i liked it! Only one thing: I gave that nasty fruit To my enemy I left it in a boot And told it ...

hey, caught up with this all again. Gosh, another amazing piece! I love the relationship between Jon and Kyle, its so sweet and well (Im basically repeatng Rieda here) just ...

yay finally part 5!!!!! And yet again another brilliant instalment. I love how this is progressing, and how brave Lyla is. I'm glad that she is keeping the baby, and ...

Ok finally finished this Stefan! it's a good start, but you defiantly need to work on this (like everyone does with their stuff). You could reall develop your ahcracters a ...

Am I a toy to be plain with ^ Dream Deep pointed that bit out, but i don't know if you actually meant played with or what :S sorry easily ...

I decided that Sappy would not know about this, as Sappy is based on my real best friend I decided that well I probably wouldn't want her knowing things like ...

Dreg just wanted to be left along i think you mean alone there :) teeth jutted from his lower jaw but why. I'm not sure if you meant this as ...